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Eternity Complex is the story about a girl called Fae, the people she meets, and the adventure she has as she tries to figure out why she's been whisked away to a mystifying and often frightening new world.

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9th Mar 2015, 3:07 PM in Chapter14
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zartala
Meanwhile, back to these guys. Fae really didn't have to try too hard to be bait.

Edit: New version of the page is posted. A big thanks to Spelledeg for her help with fixing up this page. Also go read Spelledeg's INTS: Black Gate; it is really awesome!
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Spelledeg edit delete reply
Spelledeg
Ooo, this page is neat! Really nice work on the angles. Though I will admit, I was a little thrown off by the first panel, 'GIANT BJORN!' was my initial thought before I saw the rest of the pillar. Either way, I really like your use of angles on this page! :D

Run, Fae, run!
zartala edit delete reply
zartala
Thanks, glad you like the page! :)

Do you think using a shallower depth of field will help with making Bjorn not look giant? Or do you have any suggestions to help Bjorn not look giant? 'Giant Bjorn' is a problem I would like to fix (when I'm not drowning under a pile of school work) and thanks for pointing that out! :)
Spelledeg edit delete reply
Spelledeg
I think a shallow DOF or slightly changing the angle(so we see more of Bjorn's torso with the floor being more visible) and lineweight(heavier, maybe since it's closer to the reader?) would help. In panel 2 we're forced into a wormseye and it's very clear that Bjorn is shooting up and away from the reader/camera.

Ahh I hope that isn't too much. I really do like this page! :)
zartala edit delete reply
zartala
I'll keep all those things in mind when I edit the page (when ever that ends up happening). And on future pages. Thanks so much for the feedback! :)
Ninabird edit delete reply
Ninabird
I agree, great angles. Especially panel 2.
zartala edit delete reply
zartala
Glad you like the angles! :)